Friday, September 28, 2012

Let's practice revising sentences with boring nouns to sentences with SPECIFIC nouns:

1. She ate the food quickly.

2. The teacher fell at school.

Have fun!  Remember to use your initials and block number.
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47 comments:

  1. KH B-1September 28, 2012 at 9:15 AM

    Mrs. Heim Devoured a Heath Bar in less than 30 seconds!

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  2. GCP B-1September 28, 2012 at 9:25 AM

    Mrs. Heim fell atlunch in Creekview Intermidiat

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  3. meb b-1September 28, 2012 at 9:26 AM

    oo no mis.Heim fell over a book at school

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  4. GCP B-1September 28, 2012 at 9:27 AM

    Mrs. Heim ate all the pepperoni pizza in family pizzaria

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  5. EMK B-1September 28, 2012 at 9:27 AM

    The teacher Mrs.Heim fell over a stack of books and broke her arm.

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  6. gwf b-1September 28, 2012 at 9:28 AM

    mrs.hiem fell on a pear at lunch at creekview intermeatite!

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  7. K.V.H B-1September 28, 2012 at 9:28 AM

    sentence 2. Mrs.Allen fell on some slipery apple sauce in the Creekview Intermediate cafeteria on Friday.

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  8. RM B-1September 28, 2012 at 9:28 AM

    Mrs.Lindsay fell in the claasroom at Northwood elementry.

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  9. mmd b-1September 28, 2012 at 9:30 AM

    1.she(sally) was so hungry she ate all the food at creekweiw intermedeat all through the year of 2005.
    2.mrs.bare(teacher) went into the cafateria and sliped on a banana peeland got a concushion

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  10. meb b-1September 28, 2012 at 9:30 AM

    kaitlyn ate a big alpple!

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  11. mmb B-1September 28, 2012 at 9:30 AM

    Mr.Dillahunt was walking in the caferteria and slipped on a bannana peel he fell and hurt his leg at school!

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  12. EMK B-1September 28, 2012 at 9:31 AM

    Hanna gobbled on a whole intire turky for lunch and dinner.

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  13. RM B-1September 28, 2012 at 9:33 AM

    Sarah ate the 3 Muskateer in 15 seconds

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  14. ABSW B-1September 28, 2012 at 9:34 AM

    Mr.Weller was walking into the cafeteria and slipt on a bannana and felt on the table and broke......................... his back.

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  15. cs-b-1September 28, 2012 at 9:34 AM

    Mrs.Heim ate the pizza and beans quickly

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  16. gwf b-1September 28, 2012 at 9:45 AM

    Mrs.Hiem slipped on a pear at Creekview Intermediate

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  17. swa--block 1September 28, 2012 at 9:46 AM

    Mrs Heim ate the snack bar quickly.

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  18. nh b-1September 28, 2012 at 9:48 AM

    2.Mrs.Hiem was walking in the lunch room and slipt on a banana

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  19. ke-bl.1September 28, 2012 at 9:49 AM

    1. Kaylee ate cake with kaylee's favriote blue iceing. Hot dog's with all toppings to put on your hot dog, and choclate ice cream with m&m's and whip cream !

    2. Mr. Conner sliped on a banna piel i was thinking he would be all right but his slip was a crash he had to go to the hostipile

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  20. KH B-2September 28, 2012 at 11:14 AM

    Mrs. Heim slipped on a bananna in the teacher lunch room and fell on Mrs. Rausch's head.

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  21. CK B-2September 28, 2012 at 11:19 AM

    Colin ate some icecream so quick that icouldent beliave my eyes, that was incredible !

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  22. ztSeptember 28, 2012 at 11:20 AM

    kily ate all the food so quickly that her stumick hurt for days.

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  23. ASB2September 28, 2012 at 11:21 AM

    mr weller fell on a bananna peal and pushed miss.heim down mrs.heim had to ride with the paramedics and was in the hospital for a whole week

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  24. SK B_2September 28, 2012 at 11:21 AM

    1.Connor ate his rice pudding in less than 1 minute.

    2.Mr.Gregory slipped on a banana peel at school.

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  25. HO-B-2September 28, 2012 at 11:21 AM

    Tyler ate the chips and drunk the pop very quickly

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  26. tw b-2September 28, 2012 at 11:23 AM

    treye was so mad he wanted to puch the wall but he controld.

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  27. KH B-3September 28, 2012 at 12:00 PM

    Mrs. Allen Slipped on Mrs. Heim's Shoe and went splat on the classroom floor.

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  28. gg b-3September 28, 2012 at 12:13 PM

    harleigh was in the lunchroom and slipped on some pizza and fell into grace.

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  29. TK B-3September 28, 2012 at 12:14 PM

    Tristan gulped a herseys chocolate bar in less than 20 seconds!

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  30. gg b-3September 28, 2012 at 12:14 PM

    harleigh was in the lunchroom and slipped on some pizza and fell into grace.

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  31. LC B-3September 28, 2012 at 12:14 PM

    Ms.Gregory slipped on a slice of pepperoni pizza and hurt her nee cap in the cafeteria

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  32. MS b-3September 28, 2012 at 12:15 PM

    Mrs.Bobert was sprinting and slipped on a banana peel and a boul of soup at Creekview.

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  33. NT B-3September 28, 2012 at 12:15 PM

    1.Mrs. Heim slipped on a mushroom spaghetti sandwich, in the cafeteria, and landed on an elephant
    2.Mrs. Allen ate the cake so quickly,I couldn't belive my eyes!

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  34. HW B-3September 28, 2012 at 12:16 PM

    1. Mrs. Pighog ate all of her pig and hog dinner.

    2. Mr. Pighog droped some duck on the floor and Mrs. Pighog slipped and fell on her face.

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  35. RM B-1September 28, 2012 at 1:09 PM

    Using nouns in a story is complicated. It easier for me to get lost in adjectives.

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  36. TK B-3September 28, 2012 at 1:25 PM

    Mr. google,the math teacher, walked into the lunchroom and sliped on a banana peel and hurt his head

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  37. asb2September 28, 2012 at 9:05 PM

    officer dillahunt fell and hurt himself

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  38. MS B-2September 29, 2012 at 7:06 AM

    Mr.Bob droped a bright red apple and Mr.Robert sneezed and slipped on the now squooshed apple.

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  39. BH-b 2September 29, 2012 at 3:47 PM

    Mr.Harley slipped on greasy cheese pizza at Barren Intermeadiate cafeteria on pizza Friday, I hope he has an okay weekend at the hospital!

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  40. dgSeptember 30, 2012 at 11:17 AM

    Mr.billy slipped on a banana peel thrown by Joe(kid) who got expelled for teacher breaking Mr.billy's arm with a banana peel.

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  41. meb b-1September 30, 2012 at 11:24 AM

    I ate a apple today

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  42. meb b-1September 30, 2012 at 11:26 AM

    MEB block 1
    My sister kelsey pushed me down in the mud so I was all muddy when I got up.

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  43. K.V.H B-1October 1, 2012 at 4:30 PM

    sentence1. Mrs.Heim quickly ate a huge steak with brocoli,mashed potatoes and carrots at applebees!!! YUMMY

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  44. ASB2October 4, 2012 at 9:12 AM

    mrs.hiem tripped on a chair leg and fell. she broke her leg ouchie

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  45. zt b-2October 4, 2012 at 6:50 PM

    Donna ate the pizza so fast that her belly hurt for a week!

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  46. L.C. B-3October 7, 2012 at 2:39 PM

    Mrs.Hiem ate a huge ice cream cone in only 2 minutes at Dairy Queen!!!!!

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  47. LC. B-3October 23, 2012 at 2:04 PM

    Me.Bobby ran into the cafeteria and slipped on a banana peel and landed on his bottom. The whole class was laughing

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