Block Three Writers
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His orange eyes blazed with determination as he chased after the herd.Ghost was on the way to prove to his pack that he was ready to become Pack Leader. He signaled to Black and Snow to the east side of the herd,and Shadow and Paw to the West side of the herd. Winter and Auttumn were with him to give the attack. Winter spotted an elderly buck and told Ghost. Ghost signaled to the others to single out the elderly deer. Winter went ahead to tire out the deer.
ReplyDeleteThe buck turned and went straight towards Ghost.Ghost moved out in time,but to only have to start chasing it again.
He caught up to it.
He jumped and everything seemed to slow down for a moment,a silent,slow moment.
What did you guys think?
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